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June 4, 2004, 08:31 PM
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Kage's New House
His house was a simple house.Not very big you would think that he would be proud,well he wasnt.He would wonder if anyone woul dcome to his house.Well for now he will just go around and have some fun.
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June 4, 2004, 09:35 PM
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OOC: Since you are new, I'm going to help you out on your posts. Here are some things to remeber:
-Make posts worth the space; try to have them long enough to describe something well. (Not a book, just at least a full paragraph, 3-5 sentences)
-Hit "Spell Check" before you post, and profread your posts before you post them. 
-No smilies unless OOC, (out-of-character). Not to be mean, but Alleria, to your character, is the only world there is. There are no computers, so smilies are not yet invented! 
-You can not be anyone else but yourslef! I read your post in the Cross Swords Weapon Shop, and you can only control yourself dude! You should change it to something like:
Kaga walked into the store. He asked, "May I buy some weapons. I want 3 flame throwers, and 2 daggers", (or whatever you wanted.) Kaga awaited the drawf's response.
That would be better, considering you're not allowed to do anything till after you wait for the person to reply.
-Oh, and a brightening= a day. Just a different way of saying "day" in Alleria
Just read my post, and you should get the rest. Try to follow my same format. 
IC:
TIMESTAMP: Early Morning, Ioannolia in the first cycle of Ioannes, Era X in the Age of the Darkening
Charolette approached the home. She was holding a basket of bread. She had made the bread two brightenings ago, and was eager to give it to another neighbor of hers. She was giving bread to all of her neighbors. It was sort of, a tradition she had. 'Give bread to all the new neighbors or friends you meet.' It was just something she did. And this neighbor, was no exception.
She had no idea who lived here. How could she? She had never met the person before, of course! She liked the design of the home, and smiled joyfully apon it. She walked briskly up to the door, and was eager to meet another new neighbor!
She knocked on the door twice, and called out with a happy, Serale!
OOC: One last thing, "Serale", means "Hello" in Alleria. Please read some more posts in Alleria, to understand the writing format of posts. Or, PM a mod to help you out some more. I hope you understand everything I've told you.
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June 5, 2004, 09:43 AM
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"I love my backyard".As kagebara reached down to feel the grass he would hear the knocks and would slowly turn around. He would think'Who could that be'.He did not know anyone maybe just a friendly neighbor or maybe it was someone wanting to get revenge.He had done some bad thinks in his line of work,but he left that path.
KageBara would forget those thoughs and head to the door.He would come to the door and slowly turn the nob of it ready for anything if it was bad.As the door came to be fully open he would see a lady at his door with what seemed to be a basket of bread"Serale"he would move his arm back and forth to signal the girl to come in"Why wont you come in please".
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June 5, 2004, 03:32 PM
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Charolette smiled.
Oh, well, most certainly! We're neighbors . . I live just down the street. Charolette entered the little home and smiled. I know this might sound, um, rather odd, but I've been giving a basket of bread to all my new neighbors . . . and you're no exception! She held out the bread basket, waiting for him to take it.
I'm actually a failry good cook .. . . I cook all the time, and well, I like to share my talents. She had the figure of someone who might be eating too much of her talent . . . but her happy attitude, curvy figure, intelligence, and pretty face made up for all this.
She looked about the home and smiled deeply. Your ome is very nice! But sir, I don't believe I know your name. She stuck out her hand, I'm Charolette, but most people just call me Char. And you, good sir? What might your name be?
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Close my eyes, Let the whole thing pass me by, There is no time, To waste, Asking why:
I'll run away with you, by my side, I'll run away with you, by my side, I need to let go, let go, let go, let go, of this pride . . .
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June 5, 2004, 06:34 PM
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KabeBara would stand to the side as the lady came into his little house.:Thank you for the bread".He would slowly start to walk into his house.When he heard the lady ask his name.He didn't really like to give his name out but see seemed like couldn't do much damage."I am KabeBara but only a few call me Kage,you seem like a nice person you can call me umm......Kage."
He would see Charolette reach her hand out for a shake."Im sorry but i don't shake its something that happened along time ago."Kage would bow to Charolette,"Would you like to stay alittle or if you have something to do i under stand."He would slowly reach behind the lady and grasp the door nob.With his other he and he would motion her to sit on the couch."Your choice."
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Its no the size of the army,it the fury of its onslaught.
Colse my eyes...noly for a moment then the moments gone.All my dreams pass before my eyes of curiousity.
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June 6, 2004, 06:40 PM
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Charolette looked up at him, and smiled. She liked his hair . . and she thought he was fairly good-looking. She wondered why she was thinking this when she first met him, but she was. She decided to look over his profile a little as he talked.
He was tall . . slightly taller than her. His eyes, well, to her, they were his best and most beautiful feature, but their color was too unique to describe. She realized that she had been staring at his handsome profile, too long, and quickly answered his questions.
Oh, well, it's nice to meet you . . . Kage. Smiling up at him, she lost her smile when she noticed that he wouldn't shake her hand. Oh, well, I'm sure you can trust me . . Her fairly pretty face looked up at him, but she still continued, however . . . many men still don't. With a cute little wink, she chuckled a little, her large bosom shaking vigorously as she laughed.
However, Kage, I'd love to stay. I'm not really that busy, and you seem to be a fairly reasonable person. Smiling again, she was liking his company very much. She sat down on the couch and looked up at him.
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Close my eyes, Let the whole thing pass me by, There is no time, To waste, Asking why:
I'll run away with you, by my side, I'll run away with you, by my side, I need to let go, let go, let go, let go, of this pride . . .
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June 7, 2004, 09:11 AM
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KageBara would close the door as she came in.He then walked over to the kickten and would put the bread on the counter.He then walked back over to her"Is there something on my face, because you seem to have been looking at my face since you came in."Usually he did not like humans at all,but for some reason he could not stop staring at her face.It was as if her face made him go into a trans."Your face is very beautiful,"he was very straight forward he had a point and got to it.
"I trust you its just what i used to do i didn't make many friends."He would laught with her and see her wink.He then walk over to the couch and and would walk over to the kickten,"would you like something to drink or eat i have only water and ale.For food i have apple sand bananas and some meat."He would look over to her and wait as she though her awnser over.
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Its no the size of the army,it the fury of its onslaught.
Colse my eyes...noly for a moment then the moments gone.All my dreams pass before my eyes of curiousity.
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June 7, 2004, 03:01 PM
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Charolette wa surprised at his compliment . . . and his question.
She motioned for him to sit down, as her curvy figure adjusted for his body to sit on the couch, as well. She spoke as a flirt would, and was sure to make body actions in the same way.
It is just . . she cooed, flirting and talking at the same time, you have a very handsome face . . . that is all. Smiling, and adjusting blouse, she got up and followed him to the kitchen.
She saw him, standing there in the kitchen, and realized what he had just asked her. I would like some ale . . . I've acquired quite a taste for it. She smiled, and remebered her drunkenness of the night before. She walked closer to him, and was very close to his body. A banana, sounds . . . delicious.
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"Echo"- Trapt
Close my eyes, Let the whole thing pass me by, There is no time, To waste, Asking why:
I'll run away with you, by my side, I'll run away with you, by my side, I need to let go, let go, let go, let go, of this pride . . .
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June 7, 2004, 05:56 PM
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"Thank you,"he would say as he watched her sit there his couch conforming to her full curvy body."A bannana,i love bannanas."He would see her rub up aginst him and he would get,not sexually aroused,but some what happier(clears his throut)"Here you go,"He would hand her the ale and bannana taking one for himself to.Kage Bara would put his arm around her waist and start to walk towards the couch."How do you like Aberstat."
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Its no the size of the army,it the fury of its onslaught.
Colse my eyes...noly for a moment then the moments gone.All my dreams pass before my eyes of curiousity.
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June 7, 2004, 06:02 PM
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Charolette ate the banana quickly, and set the peel on the ground. The thing she liked better, was the ale. Drinking it in large gulps, she noticed how much she was liking it!
I love Abestat! Don't you? It has such a nice neighborhood, and a great market square. She finished off her ale, and was a little surprised at herself, and how quickly she had drank it. It also has . . . such nice citizens! She moved closer to him, her curvy body looking strangly different from his own.
She held up her glass, and gestured towards the emptiness. Seems I drank all of my ale . . . I hope you don't mind, but I love a refreshing drink after a hard day, and well, it has been a hard day! May I please have seconds?
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Great Rock Song!
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Lest we Forget
"Echo"- Trapt
Close my eyes, Let the whole thing pass me by, There is no time, To waste, Asking why:
I'll run away with you, by my side, I'll run away with you, by my side, I need to let go, let go, let go, let go, of this pride . . .
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