yay, double-yay!
love the write-up.
Its a bit esoteric in places (like the parts with the signs) but that may also be cause I'm tired... one major thing, is that Erhı was told she had to get basic training in any weapon before she could become an initiate, if you want to keep that.
Also under the training for the Crowns, you're putting down levels of Democracy - might I assume you mean law/politics?
It may also be nice to add a few real people and names to the history.
And I
can't believe you're going to make me go through
all that training... good Maj forfend
