Okay, you've forfeited the opportunity of my responding for one of your PC's by reading through this bloody long thing.
Umm... can't find anything to nit-pick, Church of Faith's always been pretty tolerant of other Faith's though and hasn't even made a public stance against Planetars from what I've seen. Just the Aeternian's who get the persecution - there is after all both Temples to Maj and Phedos and for all their being Archons given some status of God-Hood in society. *shrugs*
Cheers, Matt